the essay quastion is (
Outline the main issues that Britain’s obese children face, both individually and within society. What solutions could be adopted to reduce obesity levels in children, and which of those are likely to prove most effective?) I have written my essay and I already get 70% but I need higher mark, this my tuter feedback make sure you are follow the feedback (Avoid ending a paragraph with a citation
(e.g. the 2nd paragraph). Try to follow your other paragraphs and explain what
the example/reference means and/or link it to what your essay is arguing, For the highlighted text, try to paraphrase
it and use your own words to reduce the amount of plagiarism).please I want you to rewrite my essay with holding my position that the government is the one can provide most effective solution, feel free to expand my ideas through the essay and try to use this padlet as a guidnes for a good essay structure (https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/aes-cw3-extended-essay-2023-24-a0j81pbxgts81yiq) and make sure you meet the marking criteria for c1 and c2 level as attached in the documents
the essay quastion is ( Outline the main issues that Britain’s obese children fa
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