Nice work on your Touchstone 3.2, Kiersten! Your argument has a solid base, but as you begin making your revisions for Touchstone 4, please be sure to add an actionable thesis with three supporting reasons, ensure that all sources have been introduced and contextualized, and refine your body paragraphs to align with the points made in the thesis statement. I look forward to reading your Touchstone 4 with these revisions.
The thesis statement is more informative than argumentative, and the topics of the body paragraphs do not support the development of the argument. Remember, the thesis should capture the stance on the topic. You should take an argumentative stance on a topic. What is your claim? Think about a thesis like “The government should regulate social media because point 1, point 2, and point 3.” Point 1, point 2, and point 3 will be the next three topics of your body paragraphs, followed by a counterargument, rebuttal, and conclusion.
All sources are listed in the bibliography, but please ensure all sources have been introduced and contextualized. Also, how can you make sure to add a few direct quotations instead of only relying on paraphrasing?
All required sections/components are present, but there could be more transitions between paragraphs and ideas.
Nice work on your Touchstone 3.2, Kiersten! Your argument has a solid base, but
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